She is

December 14, 2008
She's beautiful but she doesn't see it.
She's not a fighter but she'll fight for what she loves.
She'll look you in the eyes and smile
even when she's falling apart inside.
She can act but sometimes she is so open.
Yet when you want to see
she's already slammed the door shut.
Her mind is not something you want to see
but something you wish to.
She doesn't want you there to see her doubts, her fears, her flaws.
She wishes you to see her as strong and able to do anything.
She wants to be seen as beautiful
as someone you would love or someone you would hate.
She doesn't want to be played in the game everyone uses her for.
All this girl that is beuatiful and strong yet weak and doubts,
all she wants is to be loved and not be hurt.
Who is this girl?
This girl is every girl that has lived, is living, will live.
She is you, me, her.
She is every girl of this world.
She is beautiful but doesn't see it.
She'll fight for what she loves.
She'll be the one's mind you don't want to see but wish to
she is the one you want to comfort when she says she's fine
but is crumbling away.
She is
every girl
that you've loved, known, seen, heard of, liked, touched.
Every girl
is you
is me
is her
She is all of us

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mythoughtsonpaper said...
Mar. 29, 2012 at 12:16 pm
This is so relateable, I love it, amazing work!
Amanda_Roo said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 4:42 pm

This. Is. Amazing. Everytime I read it, it fills me with an emotion I can't begin to name.

I would love it if you checked out some of my work...if you get the chance :) Thanks!

RandomRanda said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 8:36 am
this is amazing! im on here everyday!
Makaila. said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 9:14 pm
Some people may not get this, but I love it. Keep writing. 
amanda727 said...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 12:37 pm
oh my goodness, girl! This one is my favorite work of yours! I added it as one of my favorites....this is amazing. It's so true... I like it being every girl is like that, yet they have a hard time believing it...every girl is amazing. I love it. Every girl is special and unique and the moment they realize that, the moment more girls take control.
I LOVE how you show that girls can be both strong and feminine at the same time. Girls are complex, but we're a prize when you get us :)
musiclover71 replied...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 2:34 pm
thanks! that's esactly what i was goin for!!! :D
amanda727 replied...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 3:13 pm
well you reached it :) Again, I love this piece. I'm glad SOMEONE wrote something like this! This should be in the "top voted"-i can't believe it's not :( keep it up!
musiclover71 replied...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 2:10 pm
thanks again :D :D
emmilove24 replied...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 9:35 pm
I agree, you two are my favorite writers on this site and you both have inspired me to write more :) thank you!
musiclover71 replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 12:14 pm
thanks! that means a lot to me! ill check out your stuff too :)
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