She is

December 14, 2008
By musiclover71 ELITE, Hutto, Texas
musiclover71 ELITE, Hutto, Texas
107 articles 24 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Normal is overrated." - Gregory House


She's beautiful but she doesn't see it.
She's not a fighter but she'll fight for what she loves.
She'll look you in the eyes and smile
even when she's falling apart inside.
She can act but sometimes she is so open.
Yet when you want to see
she's already slammed the door shut.
Her mind is not something you want to see
but something you wish to.
She doesn't want you there to see her doubts, her fears, her flaws.
She wishes you to see her as strong and able to do anything.
She wants to be seen as beautiful
as someone you would love or someone you would hate.
She doesn't want to be played in the game everyone uses her for.
All this girl that is beuatiful and strong yet weak and doubts,
all she wants is to be loved and not be hurt.
Who is this girl?
This girl is every girl that has lived, is living, will live.
She is you, me, her.
She is every girl of this world.
She is beautiful but doesn't see it.
She'll fight for what she loves.
She'll be the one's mind you don't want to see but wish to
she is the one you want to comfort when she says she's fine
but is crumbling away.
She is
every girl
that you've loved, known, seen, heard of, liked, touched.
Every girl
is you
is me
is her
She is all of us



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Calidaaw GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2012 at 12:16 pm
Calidaaw GOLD, Bournemouth, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone is a genious, but if you jugde a fish on its ability to climb trees, it will live its whole life thinking it's stupid
~Albert Einstein

This is so relateable, I love it, amazing work!

on Nov. 27 2011 at 4:42 pm
Amanda_Roo BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"We can never obtain peace in the outer world until we make peace with ourselves."
"People take different roads seeking fulfillment and happiness. Just because they’re not on your road doesn’t mean they’ve gotten lost.”
"A truly compassionate attitude toward others does not change even if they behave negatively or hurt you" -Dalai Lama

This. Is. Amazing. Everytime I read it, it fills me with an emotion I can't begin to name.

I would love it if you checked out some of my work...if you get the chance :) Thanks!


on Oct. 18 2011 at 8:36 am
RandomRanda GOLD, Paoli, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Ill never improve, if i don't try
I'm Dancing for my life (im living my life).
Im all me! NO ONE is changing me!

this is amazing! im on here everyday!

on Aug. 23 2011 at 9:14 pm
Makaila. SILVER, Mondamin, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
No one has more fun than crazy people!

Some people may not get this, but I love it. Keep writing. 

on Jul. 4 2010 at 12:14 pm
musiclover71 ELITE, Hutto, Texas
107 articles 24 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Normal is overrated." - Gregory House

thanks! that means a lot to me! ill check out your stuff too :)

on Jul. 3 2010 at 9:35 pm
emmilove24 BRONZE, Erlanger, Kentucky
3 articles 13 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"True strength is holding yourself together, when everyone expects you to fall apart."

I agree, you two are my favorite writers on this site and you both have inspired me to write more :) thank you!

on Dec. 25 2009 at 2:10 pm
musiclover71 ELITE, Hutto, Texas
107 articles 24 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Normal is overrated." - Gregory House

thanks again :D :D

on Dec. 24 2009 at 3:13 pm
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
33 articles 2 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

well you reached it :) Again, I love this piece. I'm glad SOMEONE wrote something like this! This should be in the "top voted"-i can't believe it's not :( keep it up!

on Dec. 24 2009 at 2:34 pm
musiclover71 ELITE, Hutto, Texas
107 articles 24 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Normal is overrated." - Gregory House

thanks! that's esactly what i was goin for!!! :D

on Dec. 24 2009 at 12:37 pm
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
33 articles 2 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

oh my goodness, girl! This one is my favorite work of yours! I added it as one of my favorites....this is amazing. It's so true... I like it being every girl is like that, yet they have a hard time believing it...every girl is amazing. I love it. Every girl is special and unique and the moment they realize that, the moment more girls take control.

I LOVE how you show that girls can be both strong and feminine at the same time. Girls are complex, but we're a prize when you get us :)


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