The Broken Promise

December 11, 2008
By Hattie Cook, Bonners Ferry, ID

Her smile vanquished
He turned, stepping away forever
Her chances were up
He was no longer letter her indever

The tears rushed
Down her sunken cheeks
"You'll never change"
He mumered as tears leaked

Another broken promise
Fixed with the glass
Another way out
Slithered through her grasp

Excuses swam from her lips
But he was dont
"I cant help you" he screamed
His only choice ws to shun

She stumbled through the door
The wall breaking her fall
Tripping, hitting hard
The wall ended it all

The blood danced around her
Leak into the floor
Her last breaths escaped her
Like all her chances before

The author's comments:
This didnt really happen

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