the beach

December 9, 2008
The waves, the waves,
They look so free,
The clearest thing,
I’ll ever see,

When I’m at the beach,
I feel so free,
No reason to be,
Anyone but me,

They were screaming,
All they could say,
Was Josie, Josie!
Come in and play,

I looked at the waves,
I couldn’t wait,
To jump in and take a chance,
At risking all fate,

I ran into the water,
To play tag with the waves,
It’s the salty sea air,
I will always crave,

Then the day is over,
I climb back into the car,
The next best thing to get away from reality,
Is to wish upon a star

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MaKayla1613 said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 6:47 pm

This is really good. Good use of words it's like I can picture being at the beach even though its the middle of winter here!

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ShelbyMarie93 said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 8:40 am
This is really good! It's lighthearted and fun. I really like it. Good job! :)
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