the beach

December 9, 2008
By josie Swan, Petaluma, CA

The waves, the waves,
They look so free,
The clearest thing,
I’ll ever see,

When I’m at the beach,
I feel so free,
No reason to be,
Anyone but me,

They were screaming,
All they could say,
Was Josie, Josie!
Come in and play,

I looked at the waves,
I couldn’t wait,
To jump in and take a chance,
At risking all fate,

I ran into the water,
To play tag with the waves,
It’s the salty sea air,
I will always crave,

Then the day is over,
I climb back into the car,
The next best thing to get away from reality,
Is to wish upon a star


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on Feb. 2 2011 at 6:47 pm
MustangWriter1813 PLATINUM, Crooks, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
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This is really good. Good use of words it's like I can picture being at the beach even though its the middle of winter here!

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on Feb. 2 2011 at 8:40 am
ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"When Death to either shall come -- I pray it be first to me." ~Robert Bridges
or
"Life is not a jump; it's a headfirst dive."
or
"Within you I lose myself; without you I find myself wanting to be lost again."

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This is really good! It's lighthearted and fun. I really like it. Good job! :)


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