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Prodigious lyrics
Music pumping through my veins
Symphony of sound





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MaKayla1613 said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 6:49 pm
You coul have done way better than this piece. Anyone can write three sentences to describe something. It doesn't appeal to me.  Kepp working at it
 
ShelbyMarie93 said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 8:41 am
This is okay, but you should have had more to it. Take some time to think things through more and put more words into. Give the reader an image, not just a few words. Keep writing though. :)
 
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