Rock Concert

December 9, 2008
By Rachel Christoph, Metairie, LA

Prodigious lyrics
Music pumping through my veins
Symphony of sound


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on Feb. 2 2011 at 6:49 pm
MustangWriter1813 PLATINUM, Crooks, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
" No one can told you back besides yourself " MaKayla Claymore class of 2013

You coul have done way better than this piece. Anyone can write three sentences to describe something. It doesn't appeal to me.  Kepp working at it

on Feb. 2 2011 at 8:41 am
ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"When Death to either shall come -- I pray it be first to me." ~Robert Bridges
or
"Life is not a jump; it's a headfirst dive."
or
"Within you I lose myself; without you I find myself wanting to be lost again."

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╚══`.¸.Isaac H.

This is okay, but you should have had more to it. Take some time to think things through more and put more words into. Give the reader an image, not just a few words. Keep writing though. :)


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