Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

WHAT YOU ABOUT

By
In heat and misery of these streetz
can you tell me why i seek defeat! Not knowing the name of the game and getting played so bab i nearly lost my mind
What path do i get on and where do i belong
They say there is always one person there from the start, dear to your heart
Where are you?
Alone in this crazy world where do i belong
Maybe at home with my family or hustling in the hood with my peeks rite beside me
Niether, i belong to me and my home is my number one enemy
so once again i strive and happiness will follow
who knows in this life
just remember to put up a fight
or you lay six feet two deep in the ground below
What mo could you ask fo





Join the Discussion

This article has 2 comments. Post your own now!

gracelynnhope said...
Dec. 20, 2008 at 8:18 am
I like this poem. It would be even better revised. Take pride in your work and keep writing:)
 
kianapearl said...
Dec. 17, 2008 at 11:55 am
Your poem is in desperate need of editing. Im sure you're a great writer, but because of gramatical errors, I couldn't understand what I was reading. I know some words were spelled incorrectly knowingly like 'streetz' and 'mo', but unless you take pride in your work, noone is going to take you seriously.
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback