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When in the morning I open my eyes
I know what it is I would like to see
Believe it is not the early sunrise
But you, my love, laying next to me





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AsIAm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 9:26 pm

The Good: So cute!  Loved it!  The meaningful words made it like an inside joke - you can read deeper than the text goes and it makes you feel ninja. :)

The Bad:  "Believe it is not the early sunrise" isn't quite right.  Maybe "Believe it or not" or "Not the early" or something...

The Random: Cute!

 
CallMeFelix replied...
Sept. 22, 2010 at 6:04 am
(truthfully, I don't even remember writing this xD) Thanks!
 
HotTeenWriter24x7 said...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 5:54 pm
awww...this was really cute...its short but there's a whole story when you realize the hidden meaning...keep writing ;]
 
introducing.me_899 said...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 7:48 pm
awwwww, thats cute/sweet ^^
 
Damara...C replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 9:21 pm
aweeeee.=) so sweet....nice poem
 
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