Waking Up

December 6, 2008
By ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
30 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Daydreams can be worse than nightmares, but that never stops me.


When in the morning I open my eyes
I know what it is I would like to see
Believe it is not the early sunrise
But you, my love, laying next to me


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on Sep. 22 2010 at 6:04 am
ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
30 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Daydreams can be worse than nightmares, but that never stops me.

(truthfully, I don't even remember writing this xD) Thanks!

AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 9:26 pm
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

The Good: So cute!  Loved it!  The meaningful words made it like an inside joke - you can read deeper than the text goes and it makes you feel ninja. :)

The Bad:  "Believe it is not the early sunrise" isn't quite right.  Maybe "Believe it or not" or "Not the early" or something...

The Random: Cute!


on Aug. 26 2010 at 5:54 pm
HotTeenWriter24x7 BRONZE, Poughkeepsie, New York
2 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forbidden to Remember, Terrified to Forget."

awww...this was really cute...its short but there's a whole story when you realize the hidden meaning...keep writing ;]

on Aug. 24 2010 at 9:21 pm
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go"!

aweeeee.=) so sweet....nice poem

on Aug. 21 2010 at 7:48 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awwwww, thats cute/sweet ^^


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