December 4, 2008
The flowing creeks lay along the bed
With their color oh so red
Moving as fast as the eye can see
If you dare to step in the water would be up to your knee

The red sea star lies deep in the water
It uses its color to protect their daughter

It tries to blend in so it does not get hurt

They have to be very alert

A red car sits dirty on a lonely street
No one ever likes to sit in the front seat
The car was left there like an unwanted piece of junk
Everyone’s stuff had even been left in the trunk

Famous musicians play on their red guitars
They play all music that is very bizarre
They enjoy playing all types of rock
They wake up to it on their alarm clocks

Red symbolizes love
Its bright color is something to speak of
Blood is red and can show terror
When you make a mistake it shows in red, your error

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gcutiee123 said...
Dec. 18, 2008 at 1:01 pm
Ths poem inspires me it has great flow i be trippin on this
NancyNaptime said...
Dec. 16, 2008 at 12:50 pm
I love your use of rhyming. It's great! Your poem describes the scene and image so well. This poem is really fun.
hpdjersey said...
Dec. 16, 2008 at 12:46 pm
You are my idol! I wish i could write as well as you do. Your poem is fun because it rhymes so well.
gboy77 said...
Dec. 16, 2008 at 12:41 pm
This poem is great. It really describes the detail of these different events. Your writing is so strong, and truly entertaining.
zacharyl1 said...
Dec. 16, 2008 at 12:36 pm
This poem is well developed. I like how she uses the color red.
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