December 3, 2008
By Hayley Briggs, Harmony, NJ

My broken heart lay heavy inside me,
On the ground his sword lain
The stabbing scars deeper now,
Thoughts of his pretending doth burn my heart in vain
His once kind and gentle soul
Now stained like inky tar
Send this message out to all who feel like me,
And punish our b****es wherever they are...

The author's comments:
I still carry a broken heart...my bf broke up with me almost 2 weeks ago for another girl...I didnt xactly kno how 2 deal with it, but poetry has always helped me through my toughest times...and i came up with this...just a note for evry1 out there, don't ever fake ur emotions, no one deserves that kind of wrong-doing in their life.

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