Why I love you

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Atwixt the gentle windowsills, sits an animal, unkown to my subconcious mind.

Therelies the potential for emotion.

Colors, flashing, blinking bright, who knows where this will lead.

Love is such a mystery, never to be known.





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the_wind_is_my_breath_224 said...
Jan. 3, 2009 at 5:25 pm
your symbolism of the nature of love shines so true through the murk of our existence. i have not felt so realized since i first read jane austen! superb!
 
clark g said...
Dec. 25, 2008 at 9:22 pm
this is one of the best poems i've ever read... it moved me deep inside
simple, understated, a
well done nicholas
 
Mr. Shakespeare said...
Dec. 11, 2008 at 8:24 pm
that is the best one i have read on this website. the only thing that bother me is that "unknown" is spelled wrong. BUT A SIMPLE SPELLING ERROR SHOULD NOT STOP THIS FROM BECOMING A TIMELESS CLASSIC!
 
Nicky said...
Dec. 11, 2008 at 12:35 pm
I really like this! My favorite part is the one about the blinking lights.. So much symbolism.
 
Nick G said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 4:03 pm
Thanks to all, it means a lot that people can get such a meanining from my writing. This poem is my magnum opus, and I'm glad i can influence the emotions of the world.
 
Debaser12 said...
Dec. 9, 2008 at 4:21 pm
Man...this is so deep!
 
Joesm said...
Dec. 9, 2008 at 9:07 pm
Nick, you really capture the shroud of mystery that surrounds the wonderous emotion of love. Fantasic werk!!
 
British_Intellectual_Tolstoy1 said...
Dec. 9, 2008 at 5:56 pm
Wow, this tickles my fancy, and debaser, you are quite stunning.
 
donner07 said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 12:11 am
This is breathtaking. I truly believe that you are the modern day equivalent of Gina Remington! Bravo!
 
poetoftheyear said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 12:05 am
This is so moving.
 
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