May 9, 2014
By RavenWillowTree PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
RavenWillowTree PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
26 articles 9 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a thousand words to feel alive, and one to die.

she said,
"please come home,
save me from night"
long and hoping she wept through the year
as her soldier husband never returned.
She hoped and prayed
for it to
be a
she screams
at her fate,
bit her tongue, held her kids, suffocating.

The author's comments:
This is a triple tetractys.

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on Jul. 15 2014 at 10:35 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

So it's short, but it contains SO MUCH!!! It's so beautiful, like you are, my friend!!! So wonderful!!! Your poem is so AMAZING. I'm defintely going to be checking your other great writings. Thank you for sharing this!!! I love it!!! Love the emotion in it!!! What I said in this coment, I mean it. Know there's always someone cheering for you!

on Jul. 14 2014 at 9:42 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

I love how it is so short and simple but still says it all. This is so meaningful! And the end is just ..."I'm speechless!" I had tears in my eyes. keep writing it's amazing


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