My true feelings toward you

December 1, 2008
By luckylil_26 GOLD, Belleuve, Washington
luckylil_26 GOLD, Belleuve, Washington
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You told me,
"you showed me life,"
"your truly my heart's desire,"
"your the best thing to have ever happen to me,"
"no one can replace you,"
"I love you."

You broke up with me.
You said,
"I'm sorry,"
"It was to protect you,"
"I love you."

You gave me excuses.
You said, after months,
"I like you but I also like this other girl,"
"your amazing,"
"I love you,"
"Will you out with me? Again?"

I said no,
only because I was stressed.
I told you,
"I'm sorry,"
"I'm stressed,"
"I don't want to mess up a relationship while I'm stressed,"

You said you understood me.
You didn't.
So you asked out another girl.

When I was trying to say,
"I love you too,"
"I care deeply about you,"
"I want you by my side."
But you didn't understand.

That's why I doubt you would understand me now.

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem because I wanted to vent my feelings. I really loved this guy I was going out with but he broke up with me. And I still can't get over it because I care about him a lot. So when I heard that he was going out with this girl that I really didn't like, I felt hurt because he even told me that he still loved me. Thanks for reading my poems!

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This article has 1 comment.

Daniel said...
on Dec. 16 2008 at 11:02 pm
i kno how u feel

dont worry 2 much bout it D;

great job tis should be n a poem book ;D

XD XD i like it! :)


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