November 24, 2008
My breath it quickens as he draws near,
all of my worries and trouble just disappear,
and then there's the moment before our lips meet,
I can feel his breath so soft so sweet,
with in a second his lips meet mine,
and my heart starts beating out of line,
I count the seconds since out lips met,
1,2,3,4, I don't want it to be over yet,
As he pulls away so slow,
I wish him never to go,
He pulls me close his heartbeat matching mine,
our hands they meet our fingers intertwine,
We let our gazes meet,
and behold a wonderful treat,
his smile shows he'll always care,
there's a look in his eyes saying he'll always be there,
I return the smile and maybe a giggle too,
because I know what I see is true,
It is then that I realize my head on his chest,
that he's the one who loves me best

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bethk09 said...
Dec. 16, 2008 at 4:22 pm
becca i really really liked this poem. you are an awsome writer!
EvaRicky4Life09 said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 3:31 pm
Eric D. said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 12:50 am
this is about me... love u becca <3
Jaspergal said...
Dec. 10, 2008 at 2:22 am
This is really good! This reminds me alot of Edward and Bella from Twilight. It's really sweet. It's almost like the perfect kiss.
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