November 24, 2008
By Rebecca Allgeier, Hamilton, OH

My breath it quickens as he draws near,
all of my worries and trouble just disappear,
and then there's the moment before our lips meet,
I can feel his breath so soft so sweet,
with in a second his lips meet mine,
and my heart starts beating out of line,
I count the seconds since out lips met,
1,2,3,4, I don't want it to be over yet,
As he pulls away so slow,
I wish him never to go,
He pulls me close his heartbeat matching mine,
our hands they meet our fingers intertwine,
We let our gazes meet,
and behold a wonderful treat,
his smile shows he'll always care,
there's a look in his eyes saying he'll always be there,
I return the smile and maybe a giggle too,
because I know what I see is true,
It is then that I realize my head on his chest,
that he's the one who loves me best

The author's comments:
I wrote this about my boyfriend, and how I feel everytime we kiss.

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This article has 4 comments.

bethk09 said...
on Dec. 16 2008 at 4:22 pm
becca i really really liked this poem. you are an awsome writer!

on Dec. 10 2008 at 3:31 pm

Jaspergal said...
on Dec. 10 2008 at 2:22 am
This is really good! This reminds me alot of Edward and Bella from Twilight. It's really sweet. It's almost like the perfect kiss.

Eric D. said...
on Dec. 10 2008 at 12:50 am
this is about me... love u becca <3

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