All about you.

November 29, 2008
By ~luckydutchess~ BRONZE, Keywest, Florida
~luckydutchess~ BRONZE, Keywest, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"One day there will be a chance that you will say that you love one person and really mean it, but every day one person is at least loving you now." - Me


Now you se the truth
Behind all the lives
That i honestly love you
And dont want you to die.

But you fallen for another
And I can see you do
So why don't you go to her
And tell her she's your boo.

I know that i'm old news
But I still wonder why
You went after her
When you know she's not right.

So know you see the truth
About me and the others
Who were lovin you from the start
There could never be others.

But you broke us up for a lil tramp
And now all you are is a lil stamp.

You came to me and asked
If I can have you back
But what you done to me
I can never go back.



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on Nov. 5 2011 at 11:30 am
Mroper38 BRONZE, Guntown, Mississippi
3 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody ever drowned in sweat.. (X-c)

I LOVE God!!!

on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:32 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

I loved it and I can definately relate to this poem (: please check out some of my stuff?

 


bbeast BRONZE said...
on May. 2 2011 at 3:49 pm
bbeast BRONZE, Anaconda, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
“I learned this, at least, by my experiment; that if one advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours.” ~Henry David Thoreau

but that's not the point is it? she wasn't trying to be original, she was just expressing herself.

I think it was great, and that you should keep on keepin on.


on Nov. 24 2010 at 12:14 pm
this is a beautiful poem. so easy to relate to. :) keep writing

PayPay said...
on Feb. 6 2010 at 6:08 pm
PayPay, Kilgore, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
$$$ Pretty Gurl Swagger$$$

This is beautiful and i feel the pain. And understand every word that you wrote!!!! WoW

on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:46 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

gr8 job. really like the way u worded it :P

~Tiggerbaby~ said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 4:24 pm
i was actually not feeling anything when i wrote this... i was freewriting...

~Tiggerbaby~ said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 4:21 pm
thanks for the comment on my poem... i was actually kinda afraid that no1 would lyk it... thanks again

hope said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 3:52 pm
i hate iot when people tell me they kno exactly how i feel, but i just want to say YOU made me kno exactly how u feel. and for that i'm gratefull

on Aug. 11 2009 at 12:23 am
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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know=now. otherwise, really good.

feliciai123 said...
on Jan. 5 2009 at 11:15 pm
i think that this is an amazing poem and a lot of people can realate to. yes there are several others like it but tehy are different and come from different feelings. this poem is amazing. dont stop writing

on Dec. 29 2008 at 6:56 pm
i think that the idea for the poem ' a guy leaving a girl for a worse girl then wanting the first girl back ' isnt very creative. you see it all the time in movies and books. it is kinda cliche. that is just my personal opinon.

Redemption65 said...
on Dec. 14 2008 at 8:48 pm
I get the message, but I feel the entire idea behind the poem is a cliche. Everyone knows how the narrator is feeling and we do not need to be reminded.




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