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November 29, 2008
By EbbzH GOLD, Grove Hill, Alabama
EbbzH GOLD, Grove Hill, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes life turns you upside down so you can learn how to live right-side-up"


A frown within, but a smile without.
A serene exterior as my insides shout.
An empty mind with a heart full of doubt.
Constantly desiring more, yet going without.

Trying to stay strong, though feeling weak.
Being silenced by fear while trying to speak.
Fighting to belong week after week,
But never finding the solutions or answers I seek.

I'm lost within as I smile without.
A lost expression as my insides shout.
A lost heart and a mind full of doubt.
Constantly getting lost, but eventually finding a way out.


The author's comments:
Just me wanting to "fit in" and find my place in life

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bree said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 9:28 pm
it's amazing. i know how it feels not to be able to fit in...

Hope said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 3:54 pm
its amazing it left me speechless

on Aug. 11 2009 at 12:24 am
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
amazingly confusing, but it makes you read it twice to understand. It's good. Nice work.

ashleyz717 said...
on Jan. 19 2009 at 6:43 am
I loved this poem and I think that the others who have commented it are just jealous and have not found their place in life so they are forced to make themselves feel better by putting others down.

I loved the words you used and the flow of your poem.

Keep believing and writing about positives :)

on Dec. 29 2008 at 7:31 pm
nice.I like it.And so true. It seems like everyone puts up some kind of mask as we try to find our place in this world.

on Dec. 26 2008 at 5:16 am
Hey thats mean she just is saying how she feels

Ebunny32 said...
on Dec. 15 2008 at 9:15 pm
I've lost my way in LIFE!

Redemption65 said...
on Dec. 14 2008 at 8:49 pm
Ummm....is she lost in her mind or on the streets, I can honestly not tell...


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