Hands of the Beholder

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The hands of the beholder shone white
through the crowd of people in the twilight of the day,
on the last day of love.
Within those hands was an apple, so red, so juicy,
that tempted anyone who walked by innocently.
The hands hold the apple patiently,
waiting for that one who will dare to try and grab it.
It was though they had been waiting for eternity
to find that one person brave enough; the right person.
But millions walk by, looking, wanting,
only to keep going by some unknown force.
Yet, it drew me.
I could not resist the tempting fruit
inside those white, patient hands.
And the hands, too, could feel the draw each of us had,
knowing that someone was finally brave enough
to grab the heart of the beholder.





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miszpetewentz said...
Dec. 8, 2008 at 2:42 pm
I think this was a bad way to show you were inspired by Twilight. I think you could have done a better job, but that is really cool...:]
 
grayhaired granny said...
Dec. 5, 2008 at 10:07 pm
Great job,Marissa!!!! You've a great mind
How;s the foot
 
twilightmom said...
Dec. 9, 2008 at 2:53 am
I think this was very creative and a beautiful piece of work. miszpetewentz, I don't understand what you are talking about.
 
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