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The day god took you home

November 25, 2008
By Anonymous

In tears we saw you sinking
and watching you fade away,
our hearts were almost broken
we wanted you to stay,
but when we saw you sleeping
so peacefully free from pain,
how could we wish you back
with us to suffer the pain again,
It broke our hearts to lose you
but you did not go alone,
for part of us was with you
the day god took you home


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on Jan. 30 2010 at 3:50 am
IThinkIWIllJustFlyAwayNow PLATINUM, Visalia, California
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Favorite Quote:
A woman is like a teabag, you can't tell how strong she is until you put her in hot water- Eleanor Roosevelt

Oh how lovely! I mean of course, how sad too but, I think it is very beautiful the way you say, "the day god took you home". I really like this!

on Jan. 25 2010 at 11:09 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

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