The day god took you home

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In tears we saw you sinking
and watching you fade away,
our hearts were almost broken
we wanted you to stay,
but when we saw you sleeping
so peacefully free from pain,
how could we wish you back
with us to suffer the pain again,
It broke our hearts to lose you
but you did not go alone,
for part of us was with you
the day god took you home





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IThinkIWIllJustFlyAwayNow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 3:50 am
Oh how lovely! I mean of course, how sad too but, I think it is very beautiful the way you say, "the day god took you home". I really like this!
 
Powd3er said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 11:09 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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