I Remember

November 24, 2008
By Misty Brennar, Midland, GA

I remember the day.
I can see his back in my mind.
The door opens,
And he turns and says good-bye.
I remember crying,
Not sure,
Of what was going on.
Not sure,
If he’s coming back
Or if he’s really gone.
I remember feeling the worst pain
Stabbing through my heart.
My head was throbbing hard,
Like someone throwing darts.
I remember my mom
Telling me everything’s alright
I could see it in her eyes
She was telling me a lie.
This day I’ll remember forever,
This memory I’ll never forget.
The day my dad made the choice,
And he got up and left.

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myluvsong182 said...
on Dec. 4 2008 at 10:34 pm
xcept 4 the part abput ur dad, it sounds exactly like the day my bf left me :( i can ttly relate to this one

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