Tears of Blood

November 24, 2008
By Ciara B., Cape Coral, FL

Tears of blood,
Fall from her face,
As she wishes she was in another place,
Where no one can see her,
Where she could be free of the burden she carries.

Tears of blood,
In a puddle on the floor,
And to her living life,
Is nothing but a chore.

Tears of blood,
Stain all she has,
It showes the pain,
While she trys to stay sane.

Tears of blood,
All over her clothes,
Are all that's left of her,
But they will soon enough,
Wash away,
In the rain
Erasing her pain

The author's comments:
This was originally on my AOL blog. It was just something random that came to me, but I think it's pretty good.

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This article has 1 comment.

on Dec. 4 2008 at 10:27 pm
PRETTY good r u serious??? that was FANAMINAL!!! I loved it, it blew me away...wow...that was really good like REALLY good

keep writing!

i rated it 5 stars cause thats what it deserves!

please read mine....


and rate and comment in too =)


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