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Unexpected Beauty

November 24, 2008
By Anonymous

Dreary looking day;

Gray skies,

Green fields.

Twisted tree

Leans over

Cautiously

Gets a glimpse

Of its reflection

Autumn leaves

Make butterflies

On the water's

Rippling surface

As rain falls.

For a moment

All is perfect

In imperfection

Then a dreary

Looking

Day goes on.



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duckie430 said...
on Dec. 1 2008 at 10:39 pm
wow, this is really good

LT9510 said...
on Dec. 1 2008 at 10:09 pm
Great poem! Try to work on better phrasing. Other than that great job, keep writing!