Autumn

November 19, 2008
By Josh Irsay, Arlington Heights, IL

Rustling branches
Bone chilling breeze blowing leaves
Quiet noise fills the air



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saralea said...
on Dec. 3 2008 at 8:40 pm
you have wonderful imagery, but the last line has six syllables instead of the needed five to be a haiku. you could get rid of 'the' in the last line, and then it would be a perfect haiku.


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