Autumn

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Rustling branches
Bone chilling breeze blowing leaves
Quiet noise fills the air





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saralea said...
Dec. 3, 2008 at 8:40 pm
you have wonderful imagery, but the last line has six syllables instead of the needed five to be a haiku. you could get rid of 'the' in the last line, and then it would be a perfect haiku.
 
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