MY DOG

October 23, 2008
By Anonymous

Tongue lolling
Eyes rolling
My dog
Tail wagging
Ears sagging
My dog
Fzzy face
Heartbeat race
MY DOG


The author's comments:
HI TEDDY BEAR I KNOW YOU CAN'T READ (CAUSE YOUR A DOG) BUT STILL HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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on Jan. 13 2009 at 11:57 am
can you write one about wet dogs? We have two very, very wet dogs because they are living through a cylcone.

Uncle John said...
on Jan. 9 2009 at 3:58 pm
R U sure this is not about MY DOG? I think you should write another one! How about when he wants something from you!

Yours truely said...
on Jan. 8 2009 at 12:00 am
I loved it. I am sending to friends that love dogs as much as we do.

Aunt Donna said...
on Jan. 7 2009 at 3:27 pm
What a wonderful poem! You really made him come alive. I could just picture him, tail wagging and all. Very nice!

Smiles said...
on Jan. 7 2009 at 1:38 pm
Great poem -- sounds like a fun dog!

ProudPop said...
on Jan. 7 2009 at 1:21 pm
Good job. Reading this makes me feel fzzy too.

martinat said...
on Jan. 7 2009 at 2:48 am
hey, great poem. i love the fzzy face: makes it sound real and heartfelt. thanks for this!

TomResing said...
on Jan. 7 2009 at 2:32 am
I like this poem. Can you write one about my dog?

JCB1213 said...
on Jan. 7 2009 at 1:24 am
I really enjoyed your poem! I have a dog too and I think you have done a great job capturing what a terrific companion a dog is - how they can make us laugh and make our hearts melt! Thanks. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

UnkMonkey said...
on Jan. 7 2009 at 12:26 am
Great poem! Next, please write one about me.

anancy said...
on Jan. 6 2009 at 11:53 pm
What a creative poem ! Good work

Makes me want to snuggle with my dog!

Super Poet said...
on Jan. 6 2009 at 11:29 pm
Great Poem. Especially the Eyes Lolling and the ears sagging. You can really feel it.

on Jan. 6 2009 at 10:12 pm
I don't think I've ever read a better poem about a dog!


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