MY DOG

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Tongue lolling
Eyes rolling
My dog
Tail wagging
Ears sagging
My dog
Fzzy face
Heartbeat race
MY DOG





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Girls from Oz said...
Jan. 13, 2009 at 11:57 am
can you write one about wet dogs? We have two very, very wet dogs because they are living through a cylcone.
 
Uncle John said...
Jan. 9, 2009 at 3:58 pm
R U sure this is not about MY DOG? I think you should write another one! How about when he wants something from you!
 
Yours truely said...
Jan. 8, 2009 at 12:00 am
I loved it. I am sending to friends that love dogs as much as we do.
 
Aunt Donna said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 3:27 pm
What a wonderful poem! You really made him come alive. I could just picture him, tail wagging and all. Very nice!
 
Smiles said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 1:38 pm
Great poem -- sounds like a fun dog!
 
ProudPop said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 1:21 pm
Good job. Reading this makes me feel fzzy too.
 
martinat said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 2:48 am
hey, great poem. i love the fzzy face: makes it sound real and heartfelt. thanks for this!
 
TomResing said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 2:32 am
I like this poem. Can you write one about my dog?
 
JCB1213 said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 1:24 am
I really enjoyed your poem! I have a dog too and I think you have done a great job capturing what a terrific companion a dog is - how they can make us laugh and make our hearts melt! Thanks. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
 
UnkMonkey said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 12:26 am
Great poem! Next, please write one about me.
 
anancy said...
Jan. 6, 2009 at 11:53 pm
What a creative poem ! Good work
Makes me want to snuggle with my dog!
 
Super Poet said...
Jan. 6, 2009 at 11:29 pm
Great Poem. Especially the Eyes Lolling and the ears sagging. You can really feel it.
 
poetry reader said...
Jan. 6, 2009 at 10:12 pm
I don't think I've ever read a better poem about a dog!
 
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