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Scars

November 16, 2008
By Anonymous

Not all scars show
Not all wounds heal
Sometimes you can't see
The pain Someone feels

© Anonymous

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SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Mar. 26 2021 at 8:59 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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oh, on another note you should read crystal melodys poems, they are also dark and depressing and about pain and scars and such. you can access her account if you go to mine, i belive she commented on step into the dawn, interwoven wolves(1), interwoven wolves 2: the magic divide(2) and something i wrote about north korea.
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Mar. 26 2021 at 8:56 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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i have a single use character who would so relate to this. i think i do do, but way deeper than i can reach, like, at the blocked out trauma level.
quick note(again, cool poem, not to be rude just to help), you could make to lines rhyme. if you changed the wording slightly it could be
not every wound heals
and that would rhyme with feels, which could tie the whole thing together. just trying to help, dont take it the wrong way.
abigailn1 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2021 at 6:10 pm
abigailn1 BRONZE, Bogalusa, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone has a part of themselves that they hide. Even from the ones they love most."
-Spiderman

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I'm emo too - I love this by the way!!