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That's Where You Take Me

November 12, 2008
By amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
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amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

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Breath-taking and completely mesmerizing
Energy fills me up inside
Adrenaline rushing through my veins
Utopia can't even compare to where you take me
That place where only you and I exist
Incredible, almost impossible love that conquers all
Freeing me, all my problems just fade away
Unbreakable, unshakeable, unchangeable
Loving you is all I need

© Shannon E., Glendale, AZ

The author's comments:
This is something I learned called "Acrostic" poetry, which if you look, spells a word going down..."beautiful"...because falling in love is a beautiful thing and if you ever get that rare moment when you can fall in love, then hold on to it! Because some people go a life time without getting to feel that emotion.
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