November 12, 2008
I walk into class

no one notices.

I'm out late

no one cares.

Don't they see the tears in my eyes?

Why don't they care?

I get a good grade

I hear no one praise.

I get in trouble

I hear no one yell

What will it take!

What do I need to do!

For you to see me!

For you to know ....I'm alone

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Nov. 17, 2008 at 10:07 pm
well, i love it. :) and i don't think you're alone, not in the sense i'm talking about; there's other writers, other people who feel the same. in that sense, you're not alone.
i love it. i think it's amazing.
the only thing i would change is the last line, i would separate the part that's already (kind of) separated by the .....
hope that helps!
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