Bloody Kiss

November 12, 2008
By Elora Underhill, Lansing, MI

Cold Marble arms wrap around me, protective of its prize.
You hold me close and lift my face, to stare into your eyes.

Bloodless lips twist into a smile, sending shivers up my spine.
Pearly daggers glint in the dark as you whisper simply, "Mine."

You bare your fangs and bare my neck, smiling that chesshire cat grin, as I await to pulled into a world of eternal damnation and sin.

The pain is sharp abd powerful, quickly numbs away.
As a single tear runs down my cheek, my humanity is what I pay.

The light is gone, forever lost, to a world from which I am banned.
Because of this, you bloody kiss, I am now one of The Damned.

The author's comments:
I'm not sure why, but I have always been fasinated with Vampires.I guess my obsession with them got me thinking about what it would be like if I didn't want to be apart of it, but someone else did. I suppose this is what became of that thought. I hope those who read enjoy my work.

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KarlaGC said...
on Nov. 20 2008 at 4:50 am
It was a amazing, very narrativeish

like it told a story about the pain the one being bitten is feeling. Very intense emotion,and nice rhyming. :)


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