Breathe

By
Inhale
Remember the taunts
Remember the fears
Remember the laughter
Remember the tears

Exhale
Forget the words
Forget the faces
Forget the times
Forget the places

Inhale
Take the moments
Combine the pain
Add the insecurities
And don't forget the rain

Exhale
Now you have it all
Everything you worried about
At the tip of your tongue
Now breathe it out





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awesomeaugust said...
Nov. 15, 2008 at 3:09 am
i don't know how you made it ryhme so well, and still give your message, but you did, and it's really, really, great.
 
ak92092 said...
Nov. 14, 2008 at 2:14 pm
this is so interesting. i really like this poem. and i liked the anaphora most of all.
 
MurphyRaine said...
Nov. 13, 2008 at 11:54 pm
Really good. I like the idea of it. the ending just seems to be a bit of a cliff hanger. Fix that and make it more "punchy"? and you'd be good to go. Good Job.
 
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