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Love's Prisoner


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His dark eyes burn with danger, as he reaches out to steal my breath.
Unknowingly, I take his hand for love is all my soul has left.
Though innocence lingers on my skin, his silver whispers pull me in,
forbidding me to love again, why won't he set me free?
These rusted chains are cold and wet, unseen by naked eyes.
I see the scars against my wrist, my fate is love's demise.
The broken sky brings stinging rain, nature's way to bring me pain?
Streaming through my open veins,I feel that I am changing.
My aching fingers grasp the air, searching for his power.
I find it hanging from his jeans, he sees what I am after.
By this time, the chains lie shattered, have I broken free?
I leave him with his head held down, a shirt that smells like me.
My feet now pound against cold pavement, leaving what behind?
Bloody footprints, broken glass, and things he'll never find.
As time will heal my open wounds, I'll find which way leads home.
To lay my head where love is dead, and noone is alone.




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Captivating-Kay said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 11:09 am:
Great job, love this poem and never stop writing your work is beautiful...Wow this poem is really good.
 
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singingdetective said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 9:42 am:
Wow. Absolutely beautiful. I don't know how much more I can iterate how much of a fantastic author you are! Another great job!!!
 
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andie_64 said...
May 13, 2011 at 10:04 pm:
Love is an extroardinary thing, but under no circumstances should it confide us against our will. That is the meaning I got from this very powerful poem. Excellent Job.
 
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Emilie J. said...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 9:07 pm:
your amazing!
 
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poetontheway said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 7:09 pm:
im sooo jealousof your writing ability!! i could never write something like that!! did u take any classes?------gooodddd job!!!!!
 
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a. <3 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 1:48 pm:
WOW.. I really liked this, powerful, and beautiful. Your an amazing writer.
 
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smmrox said...
Jun. 6, 2009 at 2:50 am:
i love this.
 
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kianapearl said...
Dec. 1, 2008 at 6:08 am:
PLEASE comment on my poem! I'd really appreciate it...
 
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poetry23 said...
Nov. 14, 2008 at 3:50 am:
i really like this poem.it has a very powerful effect on the reader
 
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