November 8, 2008
By victoria lunacek, Hampshire, IL

cold sad and blue
lost in this hard dark room
locked inside no way out
full of hate, saddness, doubt
my mind gets blank from day to day
wondering how long i have to stay
solitary makes me dare
to take a look out of here
how, how long! i'll never change
i am the only one to blame
beat me up disgraced my name
am i the only one to blame?
darkness drapes across my mind
brainwashed until i'm blind
no more saddness no more pain
no more cold metal chains
i hate the dark i hate.....
dark is all to blame

The author's comments:
This poem was written some time ago when i was haveing a hard time in school and with my friends. This poem goes with what my life was like before i came to know christ and now i just want to get rid of all those horid memories.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Dec. 3 2008 at 1:01 am
thankyou for the note. you are very right. thancks for the comment.

on Nov. 15 2008 at 9:06 pm
i liked it a lot, it was well constucted and had a nice flow. good job finding the lord, he can help us all in ways we can't imagine.

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