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Flower pedals
November 6, 2008
I pick off pedals from
flowers one by one
and the words I say are simple,
I go till the flower's gone.
So i go and go even though
I know it's not true.
But I try to stop it but, I
can't it's so hard to.
I'll keep going thinking about
your smiles and eyes.
I think about how i want to be your favorite hello and hardest good-bye.
So the pedals on the floor
what do I do?
I'll leave them till you finally
figure out they're for you.
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This article has 7 comments.
Tahlilah!!!!!! said...
on Nov. 14 2008 at 6:57 pm
Hey girl i loved this poem!!! I am so proud of you! keep doing great!!! I love you spritza girl!!!!!!
MR said...
on Nov. 14 2008 at 6:05 pm
Love this girl!!! Keep it up and hold your head up high, don't let no one get in your way!!! KEEP ON SHINING!!!
lyssalyss134 said...
on Nov. 14 2008 at 6:02 pm
maritza i love this!<3 your my best friend :)
stephanie.n.erick said...
on Nov. 12 2008 at 5:02 pm
good poem keep it up
I-Love-You-More said...
on Nov. 11 2008 at 10:48 pm
This is fantastic! Its going in my book of favorite poems.
TheGoodTwin#10=] said...
on Nov. 10 2008 at 11:39 pm
Wow. This poem is so cool!When I read it, I first thought of the whole "He loves me, he loves me not" scenario. Is that what you meant by it? If not, well, it's really good anyway! I think I might just have to quote this poem and show it to my friends. =) Good job!
silvagirl said...
on Nov. 10 2008 at 6:31 pm
OMG!maritza i am soooooo proud of you!the poem is great, i love!
