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Utopian Night

November 4, 2008
By writergirl BRONZE, Knightdale, North Carolina
writergirl BRONZE, Knightdale, North Carolina
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We sit,
Raisin toed,
On our forgotten pier
Tracing circles with our feet

And the ripples flow…

Drenched
In water
And moonlight
We whisper in
The inky shadows

A streak of sun
Slices the night

Our laughter weaves bliss
Into the morning breeze


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on Nov. 11 2008 at 5:15 pm
Oh my goodness, Cate, I am SO proud of you! This is fantastic--I'm especially in love with the first stanza. Loveee!!