November 3, 2008
"Hello"when i hear the words come out of your mouth i feel like if you werent there i would float away.
"Goodbye"when i hear you say that i am not sad but i am happy to know that i will dream of you tonight.
"I love you" oh my goodness when i hear you say that i am speechless. how can i tell you what i feel about you when my own legs are weak and my little heart is beating so fast i can hardly breath?
"Do you love me?"i hear you ask but i can not say it back because i can hardly think.you frown. Oh please stop!I LOVE YOU! why arent the words comeing out I'm screaming them i really am!Lord help me say the words!
"I love you too"YES the words are finnaly out.i mean them. everthing inside of me means it.I love you, i love you, i love you.So hard to say so easy to think...

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GazellarendraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 7:02 pm
Amazing. Watch your spelling and grammar, but otherwise insanely good. Your work reminds me of e. e. cummings. Very good.
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