Star Analogy

November 2, 2008
By carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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If friends were stars,
The one closest to you is the North Star: always there, dependable, and bright.
The friends that are good for you that you should have are the stars that make up the constellations: mapping out the events of your life.
The friends you seem to always pick are shooting stars: amazing one second and gone the next.



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on Aug. 9 2010 at 10:38 am
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

creative analogy :) keep writing, Mel oh and check out some of my work, i would love to hear what you think.

on Jun. 29 2010 at 10:05 am
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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this is so true and relatable, i loved it! it reminds me of that quote "friends are like stars: you don't always see them, but you always know theyre there" check out my work if you want:)

on Mar. 19 2010 at 5:28 pm
celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Around here, however, we don't look backwards for very long.
We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things, because we're curious.....And curiosity keeps leading us down new paths.
-Walt Disney

I can understand this and relate, but I don't think I have any constellations, and definitely not a North Star.

JaseC GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 1:12 am
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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hey, i loved this.

i wrote a short story and i know you've read my stuff before and id like you to check it out and let me know.

on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:02 am
Morgan Lieberman BRONZE, Woodland Hills, California
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so true! most of us don't want to admit it, but yes you nailed it! great job :)

Batwoman GOLD said...
on May. 8 2009 at 12:04 am
Batwoman GOLD, Middlebury, Indiana
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That was so amazing it's how I feel about my friends.

on Apr. 20 2009 at 5:26 pm
sftbll92chic BRONZE, Winston - Salem, North Carolina
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i loved it! great job!=)

Bridie ELITE said...
on Mar. 5 2009 at 3:35 am
Bridie ELITE, Massapequa, New York
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Favorite Quote:
She can because she thinks she can.

The description of a friend that you used is original and I love that about your poems. I wrote about friendship once in 6th grade except I focused on the people who are'nt your friends instead. I applaued you on another job well done!


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