Concussion

October 30, 2008
By Tad Canada, Boise, ID

Concussion
I remember most
The hot summer day
The pool full of freezing water
I remember the trampoline
The jumps,
And…. The blood
Blood all over
All over my hand
All over the tramp
And the others coming over
I heard the screams
I felt the pain
I woke up
Migraine
But most of all
The love that they gave
Get back in the pool
Be careful
I remember most…. The concussion
And the day went on SLOWLY


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on Nov. 4 2008 at 11:22 pm
I liked it, but the last line dosnt make to much sense. but thats probably just me.




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