My Love

October 28, 2008
By Breanna Orozco, Ontario, CA

Giving me the ring
Asking for my love
I sit here remembering
What happened that horrible night
I was happy and so were you
I guess our love was true
Now your gone
you were shot then stabbed
It happened so fast
I go inside to get the drinks
I here the shots and cries
Drop the drinks
Run outside
And there you are
Your on the floor
Babe, wake up
Tears run down my cheeks
Babe, I can't believe your dead

The author's comments:
This is a true story,but to all you girls out there.Keep your head up to the sky.

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