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By Henry B., Portland, OR
Blowing wind of the angel's breath




Shooting fire and bringing death

Forever dwelling within the heart






The mountains bellow "Sorrow"

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Anne M. said...
Aug. 17 at 12:36 am:

This is so simple and yet so gorgeous. Good job! :) I love how with minimal words and stanzas, what a great image you can create. It's admirable.

 
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mallory14 said...
Aug. 16 at 1:39 pm:

wow this poem is amazing

 
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socalledlife said...
Aug. 16 at 1:10 pm:

wow. truly amazing.

 
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Jaquie said...
Jul. 4 at 5:55 pm:

Very nice. Keep writing.
God bless,
...,

 
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evil_naiad said...
Jul. 3 at 2:05 pm:

very evocative. this is truly amazing.

 
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lostinthought said...
Jul. 3 at 10:28 am:

amazing!

 
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Bria S. said...
Jul. 3 at 6:09 am:

I like the picture you paint of tragedy within beauty

 
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xXsmileXx said...
Jul. 3 at 5:19 am:

Whoa...i love this poem!!!!! Deep. Everything poetry should be!

 
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roopashankar said...
Jun. 25 at 9:37 pm:

Wow, that was pure brilliance and talent. I hope this gets published.

 
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Joy26 said...
Jan. 17 at 2:58 am:

Just curious about the significance of the title. Great work; very evocative and reflective.

 
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LivingInLiterature said...
Jan. 7 at 2:48 am:

Short, but powerful

 
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Melissa said...
Nov. 21, 2008 at 1:29 am:

What a beautiful poem. I can imagine the mountains.

 
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Chris said...
Nov. 10, 2008 at 10:01 pm:

Strong piece. That last line is really something.

 
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Jackson said...
Nov. 8, 2008 at 10:15 pm:

Deep. I liked it.

 
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auntlou said...
Nov. 7, 2008 at 7:16 pm:

What a gorgeous poem, Henry!

 
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Dabby said...
Nov. 7, 2008 at 7:10 pm:

What a dramatic scene you have created! Awesome descriptions.

 
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