Horizon

By
Blowing wind of the angel's breath




Shooting fire and bringing death

Forever dwelling within the heart






The mountains bellow "Sorrow"





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Anne M. said...
Aug. 17, 2009 at 12:36 am
This is so simple and yet so gorgeous. Good job! :) I love how with minimal words and stanzas, what a great image you can create. It's admirable.
 
mallory14 said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 1:39 pm
wow this poem is amazing
 
socalledlife said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 1:10 pm
wow. truly amazing.
 
Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 4, 2009 at 5:55 pm
Very nice. Keep writing.
God bless,
...,
 
evil_naiad said...
Jul. 3, 2009 at 2:05 pm
very evocative. this is truly amazing.
 
lostinthought said...
Jul. 3, 2009 at 10:28 am
amazing!
 
Bria S. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2009 at 6:09 am
I like the picture you paint of tragedy within beauty
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2009 at 5:19 am
Whoa...i love this poem!!!!! Deep. Everything poetry should be!
 
roopashankar This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 9:37 pm
Wow, that was pure brilliance and talent. I hope this gets published.
 
Joy26 said...
Jan. 17, 2009 at 2:58 am
Just curious about the significance of the title. Great work; very evocative and reflective.
 
LivingInLiterature said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 2:48 am
Short, but powerful
 
Melissa said...
Nov. 21, 2008 at 1:29 am
What a beautiful poem. I can imagine the mountains.
 
Chris said...
Nov. 10, 2008 at 10:01 pm
Strong piece. That last line is really something.
 
Jackson said...
Nov. 8, 2008 at 10:15 pm
Deep. I liked it.
 
auntlou said...
Nov. 7, 2008 at 7:16 pm
What a gorgeous poem, Henry!
 
Dabby said...
Nov. 7, 2008 at 7:10 pm
What a dramatic scene you have created! Awesome descriptions.
 
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