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This is so simple and yet so gorgeous. Good job! :) I love how with minimal words and stanzas, what a great image you can create. It's admirable.
I like the picture you paint of tragedy within beauty
Whoa...i love this poem!!!!! Deep. Everything poetry should be!
Wow, that was pure brilliance and talent. I hope this gets published.
Just curious about the significance of the title. Great work; very evocative and reflective.
What a beautiful poem. I can imagine the mountains.
Strong piece. That last line is really something.
What a dramatic scene you have created! Awesome descriptions.
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