Horizon

October 27, 2008
By Henry Burmeister-Brown, Portland, OR

Blowing wind of the angel's breath




Shooting fire and bringing death

Forever dwelling within the heart






The mountains bellow "Sorrow"


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on Aug. 17 2009 at 12:36 am
amrwrites BRONZE, Racine, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Keep on soaring little sleeper.

This is so simple and yet so gorgeous. Good job! :) I love how with minimal words and stanzas, what a great image you can create. It's admirable.

on Aug. 16 2009 at 1:39 pm
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"

wow this poem is amazing

socalledlife said...
on Aug. 16 2009 at 1:10 pm
wow. truly amazing.

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Jul. 4 2009 at 5:55 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Very nice. Keep writing.

God bless,

...,

on Jul. 3 2009 at 2:05 pm
evil_naiad PLATINUM, Afton, Virginia
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very evocative. this is truly amazing.

on Jul. 3 2009 at 10:28 am
amazing!

on Jul. 3 2009 at 6:09 am
TheCinders PLATINUM, Kentwood, Michigan
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I like the picture you paint of tragedy within beauty

on Jul. 3 2009 at 5:19 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Whoa...i love this poem!!!!! Deep. Everything poetry should be!

rshank BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2009 at 9:37 pm
rshank BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Wow, that was pure brilliance and talent. I hope this gets published.

Joy26 said...
on Jan. 17 2009 at 2:58 am
Just curious about the significance of the title. Great work; very evocative and reflective.

on Jan. 7 2009 at 2:48 am
Short, but powerful

Melissa said...
on Nov. 21 2008 at 1:29 am
What a beautiful poem. I can imagine the mountains.

Chris said...
on Nov. 10 2008 at 10:01 pm
Strong piece. That last line is really something.

Jackson said...
on Nov. 8 2008 at 10:15 pm
Deep. I liked it.

auntlou said...
on Nov. 7 2008 at 7:16 pm
What a gorgeous poem, Henry!

Dabby said...
on Nov. 7 2008 at 7:10 pm
What a dramatic scene you have created! Awesome descriptions.


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