The beach

October 26, 2008
By Heather Manning PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
Heather Manning PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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The beach
Smelling salty air as I arrive
Feeling the sun warm my body
Sitting on a soft beach towel
Feeling the smooth sand on my feet
the waves crash
I’m excited
I quickly rush to the water
I feel the water cool me off
I’m so happy
Laying on the soft sand
Not thinking of anything
I see beautiful shells all around me
The sun is starting to set now
I gaze at the setting sun with a big smile
The water waved to me as I was leaving

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English10 said...
on Nov. 3 2008 at 6:45 pm
nice use of imagery heather! :)


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