October 22, 2008
By Yadira Vicario BRONZE, Long Island City, New York
Yadira Vicario BRONZE, Long Island City, New York
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It's raining outside,
And so are my eyes.
When it rains,
I cry because nobody can tell the difference between the rain and my tears.

The sky is roaring,
And I'm screaming for help,
Because nobody can hear me.

Then the sky starts changing colors,
Which means that some hope is shinning on my life,
At least that's what i thought at first, but it was a lie.

After the clouds are finished crying,
I wipe the tears from my face.
And when the sky has stopped screaming,
So do I.

As the sun comes out,
And clouds turn back to their white puffy selves and sky turns sky blue,
I put a smile on my face...
Covering up all the pain that I feel inside,
Just like the light covers up the dark side to keep everything happy...
But when you realize there is a dark side it feels like a sword went straight to your heart...

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This article has 5 comments.

Yuri said...
on Nov. 9 2008 at 3:48 am
Wah! I feel this! It's gotten a lot better! I love You Yadira!!

Sue P. said...
on Nov. 5 2008 at 2:07 pm
your peom is awesome!!!! it's just like how I feel sometimes.

on Nov. 2 2008 at 4:31 am
Nice job! I love how you connect your emotions with the weather. No criticism!

JoeS said...
on Oct. 31 2008 at 11:57 pm
This is a really good poem. I really like how you make your emotions like the weather. At the end I thought it would get better but you put in a nice twist. Hope you keep writing and posting.

Patrick (. said...
on Oct. 30 2008 at 10:14 pm
I was flipping around and happen to land on this poem. I am very impressed with the work. You do such a great job connecting your emotions to the weather. It is great how one line is the weather, with the next line being how you are feelings. I would like to read more. Do you have anymore posted? For a teenage author, you seem to have a talent!


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