always

when you laugh
she laughs
when you smile
she smiles
when you cry
she cries
when you hurt
she hurts
and when
you look into the mirror
she is looking back
at you.





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jonas_chic899 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 7:44 pm
ohh this is soo cool!!! i love it!
 
TheUnknownGuest said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 3:40 pm
I love how this is writtin!!! but... who's she?
 
So-calledLife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 3:45 pm
"she" is my refection in the mirror... sorry it wasn't clear :P
 
TheUnknownGuest replied...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 4:57 pm
100% okay!! sometimes that's what gets a good poem it's awesomeness! To make your readers guess, or if they belive what they want to in the poem... Either way... it's good!!
 
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