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To Sylvia

October 20, 2008
By Anonymous

Sylvia,
It saddens me to think that
the world did not accept you.
Life’s a dizzy dance that spins
round and round. The mind blurs and
soon there is no distinction
between what is and what is not.
Those high institutions crowned you,
the flashing lights were drawn to you.
Yet somehow you
still questioned the meaning of
success—What is it?
Perhaps someday I will learn something
you knew not (that success is
acceptance of the world.) But
until then I will carry your memory like a
black, deflating ballon that hangs over me.
(The question is, am I saddened by it
or inspired?)


The author's comments:
This piece was inspired by Sylvia Plath's Bell Jar. I wanted to convey that success is something that is intangible. Although many people will point to society as the writer of the definition of success, success is defined by the individual. It is important for the individual to determine for himself what he feels success is and to live out his life accordingly. The bottom line is that success is intangible, but that doesn't mean that it does not exist.

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on Oct. 23 2008 at 11:25 pm
You're right on with your definition of success. Your poem is so touching to me because I feel like I have so many black deflating balloon memories hovering over me