My Bleeding Heart

October 20, 2008
By Mary Espaillat, Londonderry, NH

paper rips
and on goes the tape
that mends the wound,

but when my heart breaks,
nothing I know
can ever make it whole again,

and so,
my broken heart
bleeds on

The author's comments:
I am 13 and this is first piece submitted anywhere, ever. (Too shy I suppose...) I am kind of excited to see what happens, especially once I submit more and longer stuff. I would appreciate any comments and ratings both good and bad to help me further develop my writing. Thank You.

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erinlem said...
on Oct. 23 2008 at 11:39 pm
wow, this is a great poem. I can't believe it's your first submussion. It's a perfect discription for a heart break. hmm, something to help your writing. well, just keep going is all. it's decent the way it is.


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