My Bleeding Heart

October 20, 2008
paper rips
and on goes the tape
that mends the wound,

but when my heart breaks,
nothing I know
can ever make it whole again,

and so,
my broken heart
bleeds on

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erinlem said...
Oct. 23, 2008 at 11:39 pm
wow, this is a great poem. I can't believe it's your first submussion. It's a perfect discription for a heart break. hmm, something to help your writing. well, just keep going is all. it's decent the way it is.
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