DARKNESS

October 15, 2008
By Jesusflowers SILVER, Montgomery, Alabama
Jesusflowers SILVER, Montgomery, Alabama
5 articles 3 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
God did not give me a spirit of fear but one of power and of love and of sound mind


Your grasp was choking me
pulling the breath of life from my lungs
taking my very essence from my body
you twist and pull at my innocent soul
making me want to break free
free from your alluring image
but instead i am trapped in your power of darkness
but you dont win
he came so that i can live again
live to be free from sin
so i refuse to be pinned
pinned down to the ground
just so you can keep telling your age old lies
that keep us tied


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on Feb. 23 2010 at 9:56 am
sedaracapri BRONZE, Columbus, New Jersey
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thanks so much! i'll be sure to give you credit if i read it at any competitions... but im going to need your name

jesusflowers said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 10:12 pm
yeah if you want to i dont mind

on Feb. 22 2010 at 10:01 pm
sedaracapri BRONZE, Columbus, New Jersey
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wow, this poem is amazing! i really like it. i like how i interpreted it another way until i saw that you were talking about satan and God. This is a very strong piece of writing. I wanted to know, is there any possible way I could use the first few lines of this poem in a poem of my own. I was looking for the right words to use and you just gave them to me. Please? Well, your writing is great and don't ever stop. God bless you!

on Dec. 14 2009 at 2:42 pm
teddychanfanatic2 SILVER, Montgomery, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
With God, all things are possible.

wow, this was really good! keep going!

chosen1z said...
on Dec. 9 2009 at 8:08 pm
God said that HE will make your name great...He has taken the simple to confound the wise!!! Keep hearkening to HIS voice!!! Ur awesome chick...

on Oct. 28 2009 at 8:20 pm
Jesusflowers SILVER, Montgomery, Alabama
5 articles 3 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
God did not give me a spirit of fear but one of power and of love and of sound mind

thanks for the comment

ddmaull5 said...
on Oct. 26 2008 at 10:22 pm
she has a very unique voice for a young person

nicky k said...
on Oct. 25 2008 at 7:17 pm
you are a great writer


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