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Your grasp was choking me
pulling the breath of life from my lungs
taking my very essence from my body
you twist and pull at my innocent soul
making me want to break free
free from your alluring image
but instead i am trapped in your power of darkness
but you dont win
he came so that i can live again
live to be free from sin
so i refuse to be pinned
pinned down to the ground
just so you can keep telling your age old lies
that keep us tied



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sedaracapree said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 10:01 pm
wow, this poem is amazing! i really like it. i like how i interpreted it another way until i saw that you were talking about satan and God. This is a very strong piece of writing. I wanted to know, is there any possible way I could use the first few lines of this poem in a poem of my own. I was looking for the right words to use and you just gave them to me. Please? Well, your writing is great and don't ever stop. God bless you!
 
jesusflowers replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 10:12 pm
yeah if you want to i dont mind
 
sedaracapree replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 9:56 am
thanks so much! i'll be sure to give you credit if i read it at any competitions... but im going to need your name
 
teddychanfanatic2 said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 2:42 pm
wow, this was really good! keep going!
 
chosen1z said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 8:08 pm
God said that HE will make your name great...He has taken the simple to confound the wise!!! Keep hearkening to HIS voice!!! Ur awesome chick...
 
ddmaull5 said...
Oct. 26, 2008 at 10:22 pm
she has a very unique voice for a young person
 
nicky k said...
Oct. 25, 2008 at 7:17 pm
you are a great writer
 
Jesusflowers replied...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 8:20 pm
thanks for the comment
 
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