Poemish Thing

October 19, 2008
If i ever told you I loved you
Would you care or run away
I'd die if you found out
but somehow i'd be relieved
if there would ever come a day i'd have to tell you
i'd pick later not now
but here's how my story goes
the story starts
when i tripped over your feet
when i looked up you took me by surprise
my heart finally started up again
as you took my hand our story began
now here i am sitting in my room
writing about you
I should never let my guard down
never give in
but when you looked at me my whole world caved in
stupid little love songs
and writings on the wall
for a moment all i saw was him standing in front of me
he was my sky
the only air I breathed
but now this stupid love feels like a mystery
maybe it was a dream
a hopeless reality
but one day
maybe someday soon
my crazy dream will come true

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Bella said...
Oct. 23, 2008 at 11:33 pm
I can totally realte, very nice work.
Pet1021 said...
Oct. 23, 2008 at 1:51 pm
Awesome, great use of feelings.
JustAlil'boi =] said...
Oct. 23, 2008 at 1:39 am
wh0oo0 first comment i think ?_? lol anyways awesome poem keep postin =]
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