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I'm Lonely

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I’m Lonely
When I’m in my room where darkness surrounds
I see nothing as if I’m underground
Thoughts come by the tens and by the hundreds
Questions. . .
Why am I who I am?
What will happen when I die?
Will I be here on this earth again?
Why did you leave us dad?
Why do people loose love for one another?
All questions but no specific answer
That’s what I feel
Under anger, envy, and sadness
A feeling deeper then the rest
Connecting with your inner self
Comes out of the blue
With nothing to do when it hits you

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akuel said...
Oct. 21, 2008 at 10:07 pm
thanks so much sally ask your friends to read this poem and commet on it i don't care if it's good or bad comment
Sally Choy said...
Oct. 19, 2008 at 8:08 pm
I like the honesty in this poem. It feels raw and sort of stream-of-consciousness. I, and probably many others, can identify with this underlying feeling of loneliness that, unlike all the other superfivial emotions, remains, eating away at you. Well done! Keep writing.
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