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Soft Kisses

October 8, 2008
By MorganPayne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
MorganPayne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Soft kisses

Each kiss, involuntarily takes its place in my heart.
Followed by warm butterflies filling me as we pull away
and look deep into each others eyes.
Your eyes stare down at me while they tell me a story,
silently tell me stories of defeat, pain, anger, hurt, love.
Emotionless glances across the room as we plan our
silent escape into a world where no one can touch us,
when were invincible.
Soft kisses all over.
Showing me where I should be, forever in your
arms, in your mind; in your presence.
Absently minded filling my dreams ,
telling me we'll be together forever.
Every touch,
sending a message to my mind,
letting it know I made the right choose.
Weakened by the sound of your whisper.
The deep emphasis in every last word.
Broken lies unfollowed made us stronger.
You place soft kisses behind my ear,
each time to mark me, to claim my smooth
skin against your perfect lips.
You place soft kisses behind my heart,
to claim my love against all odds.
You say soft goodbyes, making it easier to see
you walk out that door, and hope, and pray,
and wish you won't be gone forever.


The author's comments:
This is just a piece about something I thought of. I never felt this way but I'm pretty sure people can relate to it in a way. :)

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on Apr. 10 2009 at 3:04 pm
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is really good, but there are a couple of grammar problems, such as "letting it know I made the right choose" should be choice, etc. Unless you meant it that way, of course. Otherwise, I love it!

Carli said...
on Oct. 25 2008 at 1:07 am
This piece is awesome, I love how detailed you were and how you described the feelings. Good Job