i forgive u

October 8, 2008
By David Wright, Santa Ana, CA

i forgive you for the lies
for your terrible disguise
that you strung me along
with your entrancing song

i forgive you for making me think
that we had some kind of special link
for pushing me away
and showing me true dismay

i forgive you for the disarray
for turning my sky grey
that you left me high and dry
for reasons i don't know why

i forgive you for breaking my heart
then shattering every single part
for the thousands of tears i shed
during endless nights in my bed

i forgive you for the pain
for making me feel insane
for the dagger thrust in my chest
that's awaken a new found arrest

The author's comments:
Love is confusing. First someone likes then out of the blue they just dump you. It hurts. It hurts a lot. But with the support of my best friend I was able to get over it. I've learned that it is best to just forgive the person and move on with your life.

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DavidW said...
on Oct. 14 2016 at 11:20 am
My name is David W. I wrote this poem 8 years ago in Orange County, California. I'm deeply offended that Teenink would change the byline. That's a form of plagiarism. Highly unethical and probably illegal (I'll have to look into that). You should be ashamed of yourself.

prozack said...
on Oct. 16 2008 at 5:22 am
Nice poem, you have great talent. I'm glad that you are able to write a poem of forgiveness, all the poems I write are of how I can't forgive those who have hurt me beyond measure. Great job man.

on Oct. 14 2008 at 8:50 pm
i am in love with this poem. i can relate completely and think that you describe love in perfect words. if you're interested, i wrote a story on love called "Forever is all he writes" that similarly talks about relationships. great job, i really loved this piece.


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