My Bi Polar Thoughts About You

October 7, 2008
By Alexis McCrary, Nashville, TN

even thought i cant see you, or hear you, or touch you, i can still feel you.

do you get it?

we're as tight as a rubberband.
but if you pull me, i'll break.

if you're the sun, i'm the heat.
if you're the plant, i'm the flower.
if you're the forest, i'm the trees.
you're the plain and i'm the grass.
i'm the gas and you're the car.
if i'm the eart, you're the clouds.

no wonder i like to look up at you.

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on Oct. 10 2008 at 6:14 pm
I really like the emotions in this poem! You've got great imagery and word choice. Nice job! :)


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