No One

October 3, 2008
By sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
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She sits on the steps in a
sad, sad manner;
no one comes to help,
her eyes; they tell a story;
Her story,
no one reads the story as they pass
her by,
no one the pain she holds in;
They talk and walk;
no one sang a happy song for her,
day after day her depression
got worse,
no one noticed until it was too
And no one cared;
No one.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Mar. 23 2010 at 9:12 am
Well you shouldn't have been sad in the first place!!!!!! It's called SMILE!!!!! You should try it sometime!!!!!!!

lexi said...
on Jan. 18 2009 at 11:16 pm
i love this, except one thing. "no one the pain she holds in", i think it might make it better to have a "see" between the and pain.

on Jan. 2 2009 at 6:47 pm
I love your story

Penguin said...
on Oct. 6 2008 at 4:04 am
:( *sad faces*


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