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I gave you my heart
and you made it your pride
you tried and tried
and baby you did fine.
You saved my soul
And you look after me
You make me feel like
There’s a possibility
To become who I want
To trust the world again
You help me see
That there’s more to life than meets the eye




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Chicken--Pie said...
May 3, 2009 at 10:58 am:
This is sweet :D and so true.
 
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Undiscovered said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 9:54 pm:
This is really really good. when i saw the poem i thought it would be one of those sappy heart-breaking poems (which, i will admit, do write) but it yours was really good.!
 
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CaylaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 19, 2009 at 9:38 pm:
Luke, i am your sister!
 
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CaylaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 17, 2009 at 12:10 am:
Good poem! haha, i read your page and laughed rlly hard, my best friends have the exact same names, I play the flute... Omg its like i have been cloned :)
 
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Jj said...
Jan. 19, 2009 at 3:10 pm:
I think that you have a lot of potential and your talent really shows through however this poem could show a lot more depth and feeling
 
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