Teenage Love

September 26, 2008
By megan39 BRONZE, Bohemia, New York
megan39 BRONZE, Bohemia, New York
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I gave you my heart
and you made it your pride
you tried and tried
and baby you did fine.
You saved my soul
And you look after me
You make me feel like
There’s a possibility
To become who I want
To trust the world again
You help me see
That there’s more to life than meets the eye



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on May. 3 2009 at 10:58 am
Chicken--Pie SILVER, Higher Bebington, Other
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This is sweet :D and so true.

on Apr. 23 2009 at 9:54 pm
Undiscovered PLATINUM, Trophy Club, Texas
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This is really really good. when i saw the poem i thought it would be one of those sappy heart-breaking poems (which, i will admit, do write) but it yours was really good.!

Cayla BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2009 at 9:38 pm
Cayla BRONZE, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
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Luke, i am your sister!

Cayla BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2009 at 12:10 am
Cayla BRONZE, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
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Good poem! haha, i read your page and laughed rlly hard, my best friends have the exact same names, I play the flute... Omg its like i have been cloned :)

Jj said...
on Jan. 19 2009 at 3:10 pm
I think that you have a lot of potential and your talent really shows through however this poem could show a lot more depth and feeling




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