September 24, 2008
By sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
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We live in a world of fakeness,
with poisioned minds;
and plastic bodies;
where we become so numb;
that we no longer
You laugh; I smile;
though I'm crying within,
the plastic clones turn
us into something we hate,
They lead; we follow;
with discouraged faces;
we are the shadows of the plastic army,
In the darkness there is light;
the fakeness turns bright,
Our hearts are whole,
we are strong,
for you and I are no longer a plastic
filled with fakeness and shallow
like that

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This article has 5 comments.

on Oct. 8 2009 at 8:28 pm
I love Barbie! I play with her all of the time! She is pretty and fun and we go on adventures together! I didn't know she had an army though! Wow!

BarbieGirl said...
on Jan. 21 2009 at 8:33 pm
I apply to this poem. However, I do agree with it. It did insult me a little, though. But it was nice. ;)

lexi said...
on Jan. 18 2009 at 11:28 pm
i would only change the last few lines, starting from "i are no longer plastic" heres how i think it would be better. no longer numbed, no longer a plastic army, unlike the head leader, barbie. (i came up with that on a dime, so if you have a problem with that, :(.

on Dec. 29 2008 at 12:02 am
And because of you, the fakeness is sent away

you make everything real

anyone who reads this poem will realize you are right!

i know you say no one loves your poems but thats not true

i love them

a lot

ryhxc said...
on Sep. 30 2008 at 7:08 pm
I don't really like it. I mean, it's apparent that you gave a fantastic effort. Overall, good job. It could just use a little work. :]


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