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It's Your Fault

You did it; You did this to me!
You’re not allowing me to be free!
You’re causing me to stay right here!
Trapped in place; Frozen with fear!

I’m letting myself awake!
I’m not going to make another mistake!
Instead I’ll make sure you stay here!
I’ll leave this place; Nothing to fear!



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EndermanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 5:25 pm:
Just for the record the line that says," I'm letting myself awake" should actually say," I'm not letting myself awake!"  I think it may have been changed when they uploaded it onto the website.
 
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EndermanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 3 at 3:00 pm:
Thanks to everyone that rated and commented.  @BreezyMom and Breezy422: I do put a LOT of effort into all of my work and I am so glad that someone has finally realized that!  Thanks so much!
 
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BreezyMom said...
Jun. 20 at 7:27 pm:
I love your writing, Enderman.  I know you work hard and put a lot of thought into your work.  Keep on writing!
 
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Breezy422 said...
Jun. 20 at 7:25 pm:
I love the poems you write, Enderman.   I know you work hard and put a lot of thought into your work.  Keep it up! :)
 
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